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i am so in love with your writing,past and present. 🌈💓

this is so sad i cried at this complex and heart wrenching plot and i will never view life the same again 

is this gonna get updates in the future?

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I would never want to be in his position. Nope! Never, not-in-a-million-years...




ᵒᵘᵗ ᵒᶠ ᶜᵘʳᶦᵒˢᶦᵗʸ ʷʰᵃᵗ ᵃʳᵉ ᵗʰᵉ ʷᵃᵍᵉˢ ᵒᵛᵉʳ ᵃᵗ ᴴᴱᴬᵀ ˡᶦᵏᵉˀ

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What makes you think Quill is being paid for this,

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Quill's gonna be paid somehow,right?

This is the cutest shit I've ever SEEN, I love Shura 🥺

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I'm glad you like it!! Thank you! It was fun to incorporate their character for sure.

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Well, Vexx is neither, they're non-binary! I use gendered pronouns for the characters that use them, like Quill and Florbet.

If you're referring to genitals, I don't feel the need to bring up a character's genitals unless they're involved in the narration. The two characters I added just happened to not have their genitals involved; other customers added to the full version will.

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Ah, okay. Physical descriptions are definitely a weakness of mine -- my goal for the final game is to include art for each patron to help out with that. But I can also think about expanding the textual description.

That said, these are furry characters, so "looks like a man or woman" doesn't make as much sense! Vexx is a rabbat -- they're relatively short, have huge, long rabbit ears, long feet and are relatively bottom-heavy. They don't really look like a man or a woman in human terms! But yeah, more description would be a good thing to look into. Thanks for the feedback!

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cute and fun, good job!

Thank you!!

The game currently doesnt work, shows up with a storage error when i try to run it.

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Oh, hm, it seems to be working fine for me and the people I've sent it to. It sounds like you may be encountering a permissions issue? Twine (or maybe just the Sugarcube framework I'm using) saves to local memory for things like settings and save files, so if something prevents Twine from doing that, it could cause a storage error. Maybe check your plug-ins or cookies settings?

Could you paste the exact error for me? I'm nearly positive the error isn't specific to my game, but I can do a quick check.

Edit: I took a quick look around, and yeah, the most likely culprit is that you're blocking cookies. If you'd like, try allowing cookies for this page and see if that fixes the issue!

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Firefox's tracking protection breaks it because the game is in a frame served from a different domain. You can run it by right clicking and clicking This Frame > Show Only This Frame.

Thank you for the explanation!

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it's working now, intriguing game!

same here, using opera GX if that helps

Seems like this is a local storage/cookies issue -- you just have to give the Twine permission to save cookies and it'll work. I hope that helps!